DIGITAL NEWS • Script Development and Story Change

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Script Development:

Our script has gone through manages changes throughout our production process.


  • We firstly changed our script to include little phrases and words that our presenter would say so that it all sounded really natural when recorded. This helped the flow of the script and made it feel very conversational. 
  • We went through and changed the intro to include a little bit more history about our chosen topic and to give the audience more information so that if they didn't know anything about the topic, they could still watch our video and enjoy it. 
  • After our basic script was written, as a group we went through and added in jokes and funny phrases.





Story Changes:

The main question in our news package was about what audiences prefer more in viral videos, content or a high production value. As we produced our two videos and uploaded them, we saw that only one of our videos was doing well online and we all agreed to only include one of the videos in our production. 

This meant that we had to go through our script and take out all the sections where we talked about production values. There is still a slight aspect of this in our production however as in our interview we ask the question "what do you think is more important, production values or content?" to Katie Joslin. 





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